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In the salad days of the millennium, the society is polarised into two groups almost equally. Regarding the notion that, whether the zoos should be closed due to its intensive cruel or we should open widely in order to protect rare animals. However, different people have their distinct mindset. In my opinion, we should retain zoos to protect limited animals from their extinction. The following paragraphs would shed light on both the approaches before making a final note.
To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to share in its favour. It is understandable that caging animal in the zoo is brutal and so it should be abandoned for some reasons. Keeping animals in captivity is unethical. Regard to that human is a dominating kind on the planet, but we have no right to use animals for entertainment. Moreover, wildlife parks exhibit animals with the aim of making profit. Therefore, It turns out that such animals will be caged underprivileged conditions, for the long-term, they will lose their instinct to hunt food or even died. According to some report, there was a polar bear called "Winter" died in the zoo in Bruenos Aires in 2012 because of the harsh temperature.
Shifting towards the second school of thought, there are still positive impacts within protect endangered species. Zoos are an artificial environment that has been made by people form wild animals, especially for those who are on the brink of disappear such as pandas or rhinos. This allows scientists to study animal behaviour. Another consideration of zoos is that they employ a large number of people, thus providing job opportunities and income for local residents.
In conclusion, we cannot deny that both sides are well-grounded. Although zoo plays an important role in wildlife conservation, I would argue that government should take serious steps in order to give more realistic living environment compared with their natural environment.
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In today's world, the excessive use of fast food as a replacement for healthy food has become a real dilemma; consequently, some folks argue that the government should impose a higher tax on this kind of business to avoid critical issues like obesity. I completely agree with this opinion and this essay will discuss the reasons.
To begin with, the avoidance of junk food can be attributed to many reasons, but the most important one is related to people's health in society. To illustrate, it found that the main cause of obesity is eating a lot of fast meals because they contain unhealthy ingredients which transform into risky chemicals and negatively impact health. For example, based on the latest statistics it found that diabetes and heart diseases may result from junk meals, as a matter of fact, it found that it is more dangerous on the heart than smoking.
Moreover, another reason to be considered is the lower productivity levels in any society that suffers from an abundance of fast meals. As mentioned above, obesity and heart disease could result from this feeding style; consequently, the levels of people's energy will be very low; therefore, it is evident that a strong economy has been built by the healthy people who are able to face obstacles and override it; accordingly, this should be one of the main priorities for any decision maker to gets up the economy.
To conclude, due to the aforementioned reasons, we may safely conclude that imposing a high tax on this business is a deterrent and viable solution to avoid the consequences of having a poor society. I firmly believe that we should encourage our governments on this decisive decision for our benefit.
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In some countries, many people suffer from health problems due to eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
Do you agree or disagree?
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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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