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Advanced Vocabulary 🔠

1. Outrage – A strong feeling of anger or shock.
• Collocation: "More and more outrage" emphasizes the increasing intensity.

2. Wealth inequality – A common socio-economic issue relating to unequal distribution of wealth.
• Collocation: "Widening gap" between rich and poor.

3. Detrimental – Harmful or damaging.
• Synonyms: Adverse, injurious.
• Collocation: "Detrimental in two particular ways" (adds specificity).

4. Disproportionate – Out of balance or unequal.
• Collocation: "Disproportionate society" indicates societal imbalance.

5. Consciously or subconsciously – To distinguish between deliberate and unintentional actions.

6. Insecure – Lacking confidence or self-assurance.
• Collocation: "Feel more insecure" underlines psychological impact.

7. Desperation – A state of despair, often leading to risky behavior.
• Collocation: "Crimes out of desperation" adds emotional depth.

8. Mental health issues – Commonly used to describe a wide range of psychological challenges.
• Collocation: "Lead to mental health issues" suggests causality.

Subject-specific Vocabulary 🔠
1. Stress levels – A specific reference to the intensity of stress.
• Collocation: "Increased stress levels" highlights a trend.

2. Educational-related pressures – The pressures associated with academics.
• Collocation: Adds specificity to the cause of stress.

3. Aggressive – Physically or emotionally forceful behavior.
• Collocation: "More aggressive and less satisfied" contrasts emotional states.

4. Middle class – A socio-economic group often used in discussions of wealth inequality.
• Collocation: "Losing its power" suggests the declining influence.

More Collocations 🔠
1. Outperforming others – Implies competition or a drive to be better.
• Collocation: Shows the negative impact of competition on personal life.

2. Glued to their devices – A metaphorical phrase to describe excessive screen time.
• Collocation: Implies negative consequences of constant device usage.

3. Encourage one to commit a crime – Connects psychological states (anger, stress) to actions.
• Collocation: Suggests causality between emotional state and criminal behavior.

4. Direct relationship – A strong link between two elements.
• Collocation: "Direct relationship between increased anger and negative outcomes" makes the link explicit.

5. Express anger – The action of showing or venting feelings of anger.
• Collocation: Tied to outcomes like aggression and stress.

Idiomatic Expressions and Phrasal Verbs 🔠
1. Out of desperation – Indicates actions driven by extreme situations or emotions.
2. Feel more insecure about – A phrasal verb that highlights emotional instability.
3. Less focused on – Used to show diminishing attention or care toward something.

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In the recent years, the AI car driving system is increasingly becoming popular. This is because it gives more free time while driving and it should be seen as a positive development due to its effectiveness.

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In modern day society, there is conversation if the electric cars are better than the cars run on a fuel.

Overall, it is obvious that both types of cars have their advantages and disadvantages as well. In my opinion, traditional cars are more preferred that the electric ones.

Firstly, the cars are widely used nowadays for a reason. The first reason is we need power, so that we do not do some hard work by ourselves but shift this responsibility on machines' shoulders, because it is much faster and more efficient. Secondly, reliability, human is able to monitor the car's supplies of fuel and oil, and in case if the car runs out of its reserves, there is a chance to store extra ones. Those characteristics can only be provided by petrol-powered cars.

On another hand,

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There are two main parties in the USA,those are Democrats and Republicans.These two parties are not similar to each other,though they do have few things in common.


Firstly, Democrats favour a progressive tax,so that they would be able to finance their expanded role.,while Republicans do not.Tough the Republicans do support aggressive military,as they want to protect the U.S. national interests.If the Republicans are considered as conservatives,the Democrats are considered as liberals.On social issues,Democrats seek more freedom, while Republicans follow more traditional points of view,supporting government intervention in such matters.For example,Democrats support and elevate the rights of black people,and the Republicans do not,as their statement is that both black and white people have equal rights.In terms of geography,Democrats are mostly supported in urban areas,as Republicans are popular in rural areas.


Overall,it can be said that both Republicans and Democrats are somehow right in some areas,as this rival has not stopped since the birth of the U.S.

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In modern day society, there are more and more people who are getting addicted to computer games.In my perspective, this addiction may be both advantageous and damageable as well.



Firstly,videogames are beneficial for several reasons,one of them are strategical thinking.Playing games which require your critical thinking are mostly war games.They can be paralleled with chess.For instance,there is a game which is called "Generals",this videogame is about war,some local battles of Generals and none of them is superior over the others,which basically means they are all equal. For that reason,every player must be tactical,because supplies are limited too\

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In modern day society,there is an opinion that it is better for government to be in control reservoirs of clear water,due to the fact that water is a finite resource.From my perspective,it is precise true,cause no one except government is capable of having authority over the wastes of water.

Nowadays,there is an actual problem with reserves of fresh water.Central Asia is a great example of this problem,according to the forecasts by the 2050 year Central Asia may encounter with a scarcity of water the most,if the authorities do not take the control of this problem then the forecasts will come true.To solve this problem authorities of countries of Central Asia have to establish several rules in purpose of reducing the wastes of water,and the punishment for disobeying this rules must be strict enough,so that citizens would never waste water.


On another hand,the fact of people

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Nowadays,some school demand a uniform from students,therefore there was risen a question whether school uniform is beneficial or not.


On one hand, school uniform is advantageous for the reason that it helps to keep the discipline and equality between the students.There was a study in British university "If the uniform affects the efficiency and quality of the students or not",they had the study carried out in local school,they had chosen two classes,both were almost identical,both shared same level of academic performance.But the first group was allowed to wear anything they want,while the second group continued wearing the school uniform.The participants were examined twice,at the beginning and after a month,and the results had the researchers shocked.The first group performed 30-40% worse in the second exam than in the first one,whilst the second group had their results remained unchanged.


On the other hand,school uniform is disadvantageous for creative students,due to the fact that art demands a freedom,while the school uniform forcibly inculcates the feeling of being stiffed,therefore it is not recommended for art-school to have a mandatory uniform. Another disadvantage of uniforms is its cost,usually the school uniform costs a lot,which makes it unaffordable for some students.Sometimes those students are forced to study in other school,because the school the students want to study ban them for not wearing the uniform.


In conclusion,it can be said that the requirement of school to wear the uniform can not be determined whether it is of a positive or negative nature; one must decide it for oneself

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the school uniform is beneficial

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Many people think technological devices such as smartphones, tablets and mobile phones bring more disadvantages than advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In modern day society, it has become common to make copyright protected material freely available on the internet with the result that the owners of the work lose large sums of money.The discussion of whether or not this distribution is of positive or negative nature has therefore been raised.Personally,I believe that this issue has both positive and negative effects.

Distributing copyright protected material freely online can firstly help make this material more popular.Often people are not willing to spend money on a film or song before being exposed to it once,as they cannot be sure that they will enjoy the material they are about to purchase.If they purchase a song or film and then do not like it,the money spent will have been wasted,which is disappointing.Frequently,people purchase copyright protected material that they enjoyed after being exposed to it once,meaning that the owners often receive the money at a later stage.An owner's reputation can additionally improve,because frequently owners who allow their work to be distributed partially or completely online have more positive reputation amongst customers.

Regardless of the positive effects of free online distribution of copyright protected materials,it can be said that this type of distribution has several negative effects.Firstly,owners lose large sums of money through it.A lot of time and money can be spent producing the material distributed,as certain space and equipment must be rented or bought to produce a certain song or film.Like all other people,artists need money to survive and thus are at disadvantage when they do not receive money from their work.I personally believe therefore that governments should make sure that when something is performed or when work displayed in public,artists should receive money and credits.

In conclusion,it can be said that online distribution of copyright protected material has both positive and negative effects.In my opinion,it ca not be determined whether this distribution is of a positive or negative nature;one must decide upon this for oneself.

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First of all,to discuss the reasons why people purchase a house,for people it is essential for people to have somewhere where they can turn after a long day and relax.For many years it was necessary for person have a house,otherwise they would not be able to make their own bread and meal,it is all because people used to work on their own farms where they could

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.






Some would argue that all students in universities have to study the subject they like, while others think that they have to only study something useful for their future, for example, those related to science and technology sectors. Although learning about the latter subjects is crucial to secure a good job and salary, I believe that enrollment in whatever subject they favor leads to students being successful in their fields.

Studying science and technology during third-level education makes students able to easily find a job that pays high wages. That is to say, working in the majority of modern workplaces requires up-to-date technological information aiming to improve the quality of work and to compete with others, and, in turn, those employees will earn good remuneration. For instance, many IT graduates from the University of Toronto were able to have high positions and good wages in many renowned business companies. However, I think that the passion for what students study is more important than how much their earnings are in the future.

It is very important for university students to study the subjects they like because this is the reason behind a successful career. That is because the love for this particular subject allows them to go beyond their limits, be creative, and be eager to improve, and, thus, they might be promoted. For instance, many well-known musicians decided to study music because they were passionate about it and this positive spirit helps them climb their professional ladder. Therefore, I support this school of thought because studying a favorite subject is more important.

To conclude, despite the fact that a course in science and technology can provide postgraduates with a good future career and enough income, in my view, studying whatever they prefer is better because this leads to success in their field.

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Nowadays, artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars.

Why is this happening?

Is it a positive or negative development?



In the recent years, the AI car driving system is increasingly becoming more popular. This is due to its effectiveness and it must be seen of a positive nature because it gives more free time while driving.

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Electric cars vs gas-powered cars

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Republicans vs Democrats

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Nowadays,there are more and more people who are obsessed with videogames.Discuss both positive and negative sides of this problem.

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Some people think that government should strictly control the supply of the fresh water,as it is a limited resource,while others it should not be regulated

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Introduction: In modern day society,there is a thought that high-tech devices have more negative effects rather that positive effects on people.Personally,I think that it has both advantages and disadvantages.


Body 1: First of all,high-tech devices are beneficial scientists.The main reason is that,it is much cheaper to carry out experiments on computer,because some experiments require really expensive materials,that can also be dangerous if not obey safety rules.Another reason is that it is more convenient to use computers,due to the same fact that it is necessary to have some materials for experiments, which can also be rare,while there is an opportunity to get the same results of experiments on the computer.


Body 2: The most noticeable disadvantage is that people are obsessed with their devices so that it leads to problems with sociability,which basically means that people start to lose abilities of communication.It is essential for person to communicate,cause people are social creatures.Unsociability can be the reason of mental illnesses,such as depression.Therefore it is damageable for health to be with devices all the time,at least there should be one day in every week without high-tech apparatuses.


Conclusion:In conclusion it can be said that high-tech devices have both negative and positive effects.In my opinion,it can not be determined whether those devices are of a positive or negative nature; one must decide upon for oneself.

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In modern day society

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Question:There is a problem today that copyright materials such as music,films and books are freely available on the Internet with the result that the owners of the works lose money

Do you feel that this is a good thing or a bad thing?



Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge experience


You should write at least 250 words

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there are some countries where it is more popular to own an apartment rather than renting it.This is because people fear of the thought of not having place where you can return any time.From my point of view owning one is better.

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Nowadays in some countries all around the world ,owning an accommodation is more significant than renting a home for citizens. There are multiple reasons why this is the case. From my point of view ,this can not be a positive situation.

Firstly ,to explain the reasons for this case ,one of the main reasons is investments. For example ,in most countries all around the world where construction is the most common activity ,humans habitually are interested in investing their budget in purchasing accommodation to make a good profit. Moreover ,we all know the value of homes is staggering that can not be ignored. This is a cause why this is the case. Additionally , to buy own home the statue of people can be identified. Therefore ,this makes it clear causes why it is a common and crucial operation are conspicuous that should be considered.

Secondly ,this can be a negative decision with numerous disadvantages. For instance ,humans may decide to purchase their own accommodation such as an apartment or a detached house. This is true that in today's modern world the price of these places is increasing dramatically and the population can not afford it. They are required to take out a mortgage from the bank. Obviously ,easier said than done because banks these days have many rules that most humans could not be able to accept. As a result of borrowing money from the bank, they are not capable to put down a deposit and getting into debt will be occurred. All things considered ,it becomes apparent there are many detrimental effects that owning a home can be brought by itself.

To summarise ,this is true that many causes are noticeable for this case. Needless to say ,this is not a positive situation. It is predicted that to continue this decision by societies ,the population who lose their money will increase considerably in the near future.

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